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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 2 posts => Topic started by: Kimberly B. on August 14, 2020, 02:35:40 AM

Title: Exiled--Self-edit
Post by: Kimberly B. on August 14, 2020, 02:35:40 AM

Hey everyone!

You can read my week 2 self-edited version of my story "Exiled" here.

https://kimberlybea.com/2020/08/14/writer-in-motion-week-2/

Title: Re: Exiled--Self-edit
Post by: dankoboldt on August 14, 2020, 04:56:18 AM

Wow, what an entertaining story! It was effortlessly written, too. Bravo on writing an older woman MC in a fantasy story. The most surprising part is that it ended with a knock at the door (which is how my story starts).

Well done.