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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 3 posts => Topic started by: Kristin Record on November 19, 2019, 08:51:19 PM

Title: The Drowning Game - Third draft (CP round)
Post by: Kristin Record on November 19, 2019, 08:51:19 PM

Please find the third draft of The Drowning Game here https://wickedrambling.wordpress.com/2019/11/19/writer-in-motion-week-3-the-drowning-game-3rd-draft/ (https://wickedrambling.wordpress.com/2019/11/19/writer-in-motion-week-3-the-drowning-game-3rd-draft/)

Title: Re: The Drowning Game - Third draft (CP round)
Post by: Grim Dreamer on November 19, 2019, 10:02:39 PM

Very nice! Like many of the changes!

Title: Re: The Drowning Game - Third draft (CP round)
Post by: Fabierien on November 23, 2019, 11:00:15 PM

This was such a good update to the story. I feel like I understand the characters so much more now. Very good job.