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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 2 posts => Topic started by: Kristin Record on November 11, 2019, 10:52:27 PM

Title: The Drowning Game - Second Draft
Post by: Kristin Record on November 11, 2019, 10:52:27 PM

 
Enjoy the second revision of The Drowning Game here - https://wickedrambling.wordpress.com/2019/11/11/writer-in-motion-week-2/ (https://wickedrambling.wordpress.com/2019/11/11/writer-in-motion-week-2/)

Title: Re: The Drowning Game - Second Draft
Post by: Grim Dreamer on November 11, 2019, 11:54:57 PM

Nice! Looking good, and I still love the theme poking up!

Title: Re: The Drowning Game - Second Draft
Post by: Fabierien on November 17, 2019, 03:12:09 AM

That...that...that...disturbed me on many levels. I did enjoy the ending and it made me happy.



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