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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 2 posts => Topic started by: abailton on July 24, 2021, 02:48:38 AM

Title: Self-edited Draft, Week 2: In the Country of Shadows
Post by: abailton on July 24, 2021, 02:48:38 AM

It took me several tries to edit this to something I'm comfortable with. It is only 540 words.

https://www.adriabailton.com/musings/writer-in-motion-week-2-self-edited-story (https://www.adriabailton.com/musings/writer-in-motion-week-2-self-edited-story)

Title: Re: Self-edited Draft, Week 2: In the Country of Shadows
Post by: songmaiden on July 24, 2021, 08:04:34 PM

You?re so hard on yourself! I think this is unique piece, and I don?t think it?s too short at all.