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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 3 posts => Topic started by: Thuy on November 23, 2019, 05:52:16 AM

Title: Draft 3: The Crow on a Birch
Post by: Thuy on November 23, 2019, 05:52:16 AM

Thank you Ariana for your help with my latest draft!  :heart:

https://www.tmnstories.com/wim-round-2-week-3-the-cp-edited-draft/

Title: Re: Draft 3: The Crow on a Birch
Post by: songmaiden on November 23, 2019, 02:25:12 PM

Love the edits, and the deep PoV.

Title: Re: Draft 3: The Crow on a Birch
Post by: Grim Dreamer on November 23, 2019, 02:26:08 PM

Nice work!

Title: Re: Draft 3: The Crow on a Birch
Post by: arianascribbles on November 23, 2019, 03:08:28 PM

My pleasure  :heart: :heart: :heart:

Title: Re: Draft 3: The Crow on a Birch
Post by: Fabierien on November 24, 2019, 01:01:25 AM

She is so cruel yet so wonderful. Such depth of character in such few words. This was one of my favorites from the beginning and it really stands out. *hats off* You are a rockstar.