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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 4 posts => Topic started by: songmaiden on December 02, 2019, 12:10:10 AM

Title: Evayolin's Ghosts (Final Draft)
Post by: songmaiden on December 02, 2019, 12:10:10 AM

Finally! I've gotten to my final draft. I'm hoping it's clearer, and better, than the first! LOL. I'm hoping to get to read everyone else's throughout the week!

https://smroffey.wixsite.com/smroffey/single-post/2019/12/01/Writer-In-Motion-Week-4-Evayolins-Ghosts-Final-Draft

Title: Re: Evayolin's Ghosts (Final Draft)
Post by: Fabierien on December 02, 2019, 12:26:16 AM

This was fantastic. I really loved the changes and it is much more clear now. I cannot wait to see where this story goes.

Title: Re: Evayolin's Ghosts (Final Draft)
Post by: Grim Dreamer on December 02, 2019, 12:32:09 AM

Very nice!