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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 1 posts => Topic started by: ARobertsWrites on August 04, 2020, 12:25:47 PM

Title: Unedited, Untitled Draft
Post by: ARobertsWrites on August 04, 2020, 12:25:47 PM

Here's my unedited draft: https://writing.fanfarevt.com/writer-in-motion-unedited-first-draft/

This is totally out of the norm for genre. Curse my pantser writing style. :D I've got some serious work to do now. Clean up, streamline, and...figure out the actual story. No biggie, right?!

Title: Re: Unedited, Untitled Draft
Post by: Vickywrites on August 04, 2020, 03:20:26 PM

This is great, what a conundrum for them! This could easily be the start of an awesome thriller or romantic suspense. I like the imagery with the campfire too!

Title: Re: Unedited, Untitled Draft
Post by: Erin Fulmer on August 04, 2020, 06:52:12 PM

Loved the dynamic between the two characters. Also, this line: "The silence curled through the camp" really struck me. Well done. I look forward to seeing where you take it!

Title: Re: Unedited, Untitled Draft
Post by: ARobertsWrites on August 05, 2020, 12:05:55 AM

Thanks :-D

Title: Re: Unedited, Untitled Draft
Post by: SKaeth on August 06, 2020, 03:20:20 PM

Oh very interesting direction! I love the relationship between the two, and the pros and cons back and forth! This is going to be great to see your process as you polish this!