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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 1 posts => Topic started by: Steph Whitaker on August 05, 2020, 04:05:15 PM

Title: First Draft: Marked for Death
Post by: Steph Whitaker on August 05, 2020, 04:05:15 PM

It's here! My first draft(s) of my #writerinmotion short story. Yes, you saw that right DRAFTS.  ??? This time I had 2 characters that wanted to tell the story. I just couldn't pick. ::) So I wrote both. Let me know what you think.

https://stephwhitaker80.wixsite.com/swhitakerwrites/post/writerinmotion-2020-the-first-draft

I'm also taking votes to see which story everyone thinks I should work with through the next rounds of editing. Only one can win! Here's the link if you want to share your vote.

https://twitter.com/StephWhitaker80/status/1291039454321356800

Title: Re: First Draft: Marked for Death
Post by: SKaeth on August 06, 2020, 03:41:10 PM

I'm no help--I love them both! Amazing story, from both points of view! It's gonna be great to see you polish these!

Title: Re: First Draft: Marked for Death
Post by: Erin Fulmer on August 07, 2020, 06:15:07 PM

Love how you went about exploring your dual ideas here. Very interested to see how you blend the two POVs!