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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 1 posts => Topic started by: K. J. Harrowick on August 07, 2020, 03:50:57 PM

Title: CITY WITHOUT LIGHT - K. J. Harrowick
Post by: K. J. Harrowick on August 07, 2020, 03:50:57 PM
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               CITY WITHOUT LIGHT
I dreamed of her again last night, the woman who started a war none of us could escape. She?s been burned into my thoughts since birth, and when I stepped into hypersleep all those years ago, her picture was the only thing of value I had left.

Braygen clenched his fist, the familiar pain digging into his bones. A month ago it centered in his hip, but today the ache buried itself in his arm, and he?d never be able to aim properly if he couldn?t hold his bow.

?We can do this tomorrow, brother. Those fires will burn for a few days yet.? Marco clapped him on the shoulder, mud splattered across his russet brown hand. His friend had a point. Green forge fires burned inside the steel monolith, a giant orb with long legs holding it high.
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Inspirations: Pinterest (https://www.pinterest.com/kjharrowick/wim-2020/) | Sun by Thomas Bergerson (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=elkWdlgrrOo)


 
Title: Re: CITY WITHOUT LIGHT - K. J. Harrowick
Post by: SKaeth on August 07, 2020, 03:52:04 PM
KJ!!!!! I love seeing the world through Braygen's eyes! The sense of fierce attachment through calm control that breaks over the course of the desperate events is excellent! Very cool!
Title: Re: CITY WITHOUT LIGHT - K. J. Harrowick
Post by: K. J. Harrowick on August 07, 2020, 06:27:14 PM
OMG... maybe I did nail him.  :D

He definitely tries very hard to keep cool and in control all the time, but his poor brain is a mess.  ::)
Title: Re: CITY WITHOUT LIGHT - K. J. Harrowick
Post by: Blueroan on August 07, 2020, 11:06:12 PM
Oooo I'm very intrigued! So cool!

WHAT HAPPENED TO DRAGONS?!

But he seems a formchanger of sorts. This pleases me. *nods*

Can't wait to see where you go with it next!