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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 1 posts => Topic started by: Kimberly B. on August 07, 2020, 08:05:12 PM

Title: First Draft -- Exiled
Post by: Kimberly B. on August 07, 2020, 08:05:12 PM

You can find my super rough, unedited first draft of my story Exiled on my website here:
https://kimberlybea.com/2020/08/07/writer-in-motion-week-1/

Title: Re: First Draft -- Exiled
Post by: Helena on August 07, 2020, 08:39:54 PM

Absolutely delightful!

Title: Re: First Draft -- Exiled
Post by: Dani Frank on August 07, 2020, 10:09:19 PM

Ooh the last sentence! So suspenseful. There's so much world building in this.

Title: Re: First Draft -- Exiled
Post by: SKaeth on August 08, 2020, 12:45:04 AM

The voice here is absolutely gorgeous, and that last sentence! I want to know what happens next!

Title: Re: First Draft -- Exiled
Post by: Blueroan on August 08, 2020, 12:20:41 PM

Oooo I really loved this, it's very fairy tale like, and I hope she gets out and free!