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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 2 posts => Topic started by: ShaynaGrissom on August 07, 2020, 10:25:22 PM

Title: Strangers (Draft 2)
Post by: ShaynaGrissom on August 07, 2020, 10:25:22 PM

I changed the name and pinpointed the theme in this version. I think in short stories, there needs to be a poignant theme, but I don't decide what that is in the first draft. It has been decided now.

https://shaynamightbeanauthor.blogspot.com/2020/08/strangers-writer-in-motion-2nd-draft.html


I also realize my blog was hard to read so I changed up the format a little.

Title: Re: Strangers (Draft 2)
Post by: songmaiden on August 12, 2020, 12:39:39 PM

This goes from a really nice sibling story to deliciously gruesome in the blink of an eye. I didn?t expect the twist!!

Title: Re: Strangers (Draft 2)
Post by: Vickywrites on August 15, 2020, 12:25:57 PM

Having read the first draft I knew the twist was coming but it still made me gasp! Such a good story.