Writer In Motion Forum
WRITER IN MOTION => Week 1 posts => Topic started by: Erin Fulmer on July 14, 2021, 05:58:55 PM
-
All right, here's a link to my first draft! I don't know what it's doing but it sure is doing SOMETHING.
He comes at dusk, the shadow man.
He hovers in the corner of my vision, dissolving when I look straight at him, looming when I look away. Sometimes he is indistinct, smudged at his edges like smoke, only the suggestion of a man?s shape and a man?s height. Other times, he seems almost solid. At those moments, I believe that if I turn just enough, if I squint just right, he might even have a face I could know.
Read the rest here: https://erinfulmerwrites.wordpress.com/2021/07/14/wim-2021-first-draft/
-
I really loved this! Such powerful imagery.... Can't wait to see what happens with it over the next few weeks!