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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 1 posts => Topic started by: Steph Whitaker on November 05, 2019, 09:14:19 PM

Title: The First Draft
Post by: Steph Whitaker on November 05, 2019, 09:14:19 PM

Here it is! The first draft of my short story. ;) :taco:
https://stephwhitaker80.wixsite.com/swhitakerwrites/post/writerinmotion-the-first-draft

Title: Re: The First Draft
Post by: Grim Dreamer on November 06, 2019, 03:01:38 AM

Interesting idea! Should be fun to see it evolve.

Title: Re: The First Draft
Post by: songmaiden on November 07, 2019, 01:37:19 AM

Loved this!

Title: Re: The First Draft
Post by: rmcwilliams86 on November 08, 2019, 02:29:49 AM

Very nice. Loved it.

Title: Re: The First Draft
Post by: SKaeth on November 12, 2019, 01:57:35 AM

Great job! I love the sharp turn the story took, with a sudden uptick in danger, and the ending was beautiful!

Title: Re: The First Draft
Post by: Steph Whitaker on November 14, 2019, 02:41:43 PM

Thank you for all the encouraging comments! I can't wait for you to read the self-edited version.  ;D

Title: Re: The First Draft
Post by: Fariha Khayyam on November 14, 2019, 04:02:35 PM

oohh i want to read the final draft of this one!