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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 1 posts => Topic started by: songmaiden on November 07, 2019, 01:52:22 AM

Title: Evayolin's Ghosts (First Draft)
Post by: songmaiden on November 07, 2019, 01:52:22 AM

Here's the link to my first draft. Can't wait to read everyone's. :)
https://smroffey.wixsite.com/smroffey/single-post/2019/11/06/Writer-In-Motion-Week-1-Evayolins-Ghosts

Title: Re: Evayolin's Ghosts (First Draft)
Post by: Grim Dreamer on November 07, 2019, 10:18:28 PM

Lots of nice description and characterization! Nice job!

Title: Re: Evayolin's Ghosts (First Draft)
Post by: K. J. Harrowick on November 09, 2019, 04:08:35 PM

Love love love this visit to Pelori Nepal. So excited to see this one flesh out. :dragon: :taco:

Title: Re: Evayolin's Ghosts (First Draft)
Post by: KristenH on November 09, 2019, 11:48:45 PM

I love this ghost story theme and how it took them on a mystical journey. Great characterization and nice storytelling.

Title: Re: Evayolin's Ghosts (First Draft)
Post by: Jeni Chappelle on November 10, 2019, 03:35:18 AM

So cool that this is where this photo took you. I can totally see it too! The artwork is a nice touch. This definitely made me want to read more too--that twist!!

Title: Re: Evayolin's Ghosts (First Draft)
Post by: SKaeth on November 12, 2019, 02:00:43 AM

I love your vivid description and the direction you took with this! Really nice job!