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WRITER IN MOTION => Week 2 posts => Topic started by: kassamarandra on November 12, 2019, 09:10:41 PM

Title: Homecoming self-edit (draft 2)
Post by: kassamarandra on November 12, 2019, 09:10:41 PM

Here's the link to my Week 2 self-edit of my flash piece Homecoming.
Thank you to all the previous commenters. I appreciate the encouragement! I hope to pay it back this round.

https://www.cmfick.com/post/writer-in-motion-week-2

Title: Re: Homecoming self-edit (draft 2)
Post by: Fabierien on November 17, 2019, 01:31:59 PM

I enjoyed this story and the presumed good ending. I liked the changes you made to the opening, the story felt personal. It is interesting that both you and I had a similar take on the prompt. I was even going to call mine Homecoming till I saw your title in week one. lol.