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Week 5 posts / Final Thoughts
« on: September 04, 2020, 12:41:41 AM »
Hi all!

Thanks to all my CP partners. I loved working with you all.

This story was a lot of fun to do, and the schedule was flexible enough that I was even able to take a vacation toward the end.

Like I said somewhere before, this short is actually a bridge between another short I published with ENVIE magazine and my current project The Day Dredes. It's a bit of an easter egg thing.

Anyhoo, happy PitMad everyone!

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Week 2 posts / Re: The Bride (2nd draft, self-edits)
« on: August 13, 2020, 07:14:10 PM »
This is really cool. As someone who roots for the reluctant hero, I'm not satisfied with the ending. I'd love to see her choose the demon, but it's not my story!

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Week 2 posts / Strangers (Draft 2)
« on: August 07, 2020, 10:25:22 PM »
I changed the name and pinpointed the theme in this version. I think in short stories, there needs to be a poignant theme, but I don't decide what that is in the first draft. It has been decided now.

https://shaynamightbeanauthor.blogspot.com/2020/08/strangers-writer-in-motion-2nd-draft.html


I also realize my blog was hard to read so I changed up the format a little.


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Week 1 posts / Re: First Draft: Stuck in Limbo
« on: August 03, 2020, 07:09:10 PM »
This is beautiful. I love how it evokes a feeling when I'm not entirely certain what it is about.

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Week 1 posts / Re: THE LIGHTHOUSE
« on: August 03, 2020, 07:01:59 PM »
There's some great imagery here. Looking forward to seeing refined.

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Week 1 posts / Re: First Draft: Stars
« on: August 03, 2020, 06:55:41 PM »
I like the Howl's moving castle vibe. I can't wait to see this after it's been tightened up.

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