Here's a link to my self-edited draft two of Headhunters!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nEeU-DsCbN7IegBoW_QsEFEMr4gytg0QjB-2up8vr2M/edit?usp=sharingI thought about removing the colors, just to spare my CPs and editor. I really did. But I was talked down from that ledge, and besides, why not make others suffer a little bit of the agony it took me to color that speech, word by rainbow word? It only seems fair.
In all seriousness, it didn't take me as long as I thought it would to trim that extra 125 words. I was even able to expand a couple sections. I'd still like a bit more of the story at the end, but it's tough to find places in the beginning and middle to sacrifice so there can be a bit more meat on the climax. Altogether, I had fun, and I hope my CPs don?t start bleeding from their eyes before they finish reading.
Topic: Headhunters - Second Draft (Read 406 times)