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Thuy

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Draft 3: The Crow on a Birch
« on: November 23, 2019, 05:52:16 AM »
Thank you Ariana for your help with my latest draft!  :heart:

https://www.tmnstories.com/wim-round-2-week-3-the-cp-edited-draft/
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songmaiden

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Re: Draft 3: The Crow on a Birch
« Reply #1 on: November 23, 2019, 02:25:12 PM »
Love the edits, and the deep PoV.
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Grim Dreamer

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Re: Draft 3: The Crow on a Birch
« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2019, 02:26:08 PM »
Nice work!
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Re: Draft 3: The Crow on a Birch
« Reply #3 on: November 23, 2019, 03:08:28 PM »
My pleasure  :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Fabierien

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Re: Draft 3: The Crow on a Birch
« Reply #4 on: November 24, 2019, 01:01:25 AM »
She is so cruel yet so wonderful. Such depth of character in such few words. This was one of my favorites from the beginning and it really stands out. *hats off* You are a rockstar.
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