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Kristin Record

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The Drowning Game - Second Draft
« on: November 11, 2019, 10:52:27 PM »
 
Enjoy the second revision of The Drowning Game here - https://wickedrambling.wordpress.com/2019/11/11/writer-in-motion-week-2/
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Re: The Drowning Game - Second Draft
« Reply #1 on: November 11, 2019, 11:54:57 PM »
Nice! Looking good, and I still love the theme poking up!
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Re: The Drowning Game - Second Draft
« Reply #2 on: November 17, 2019, 03:12:09 AM »
That...that...that...disturbed me on many levels. I did enjoy the ending and it made me happy.



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