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The Watcher in the Vale - Third Draft
« on: August 22, 2020, 04:32:10 PM »
With many thanks to Nyssa Rae and K.J. Harrowick, here is my third draft of "The Watcher in the Vale" along with a few notes about the critique process:
http://dankoboldt.com/writer-in-motion-third-draft/
Dan Koboldt
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Creator of THE TRIANGLE, a sci-fi adventure series (Serial Box, April 2019)
Editor of Putting the Science in Fiction (Writer's Digest, October 2018)
Author of Gateways to Alissia (Harper Voyager 2016-2018)