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Week 2 posts / Week 2: Second Draft of Sulphur & Smoke
« on: July 23, 2021, 01:12:00 PM »
I've made a few changes to the beginning of my story, and tried to tighten up the prose throughout. Here are the new first lines:
Living in a big city means you see all kinds of strange things. And me, well, I?ve seen and done even stranger things in my several lifetimes. But when this man stopped in front of me and smiled, it set my teeth on edge.
https://northseawriter.wordpress.com/2021/07/23/writer-in-motion-week-2-sulphur-and-smoke/
Living in a big city means you see all kinds of strange things. And me, well, I?ve seen and done even stranger things in my several lifetimes. But when this man stopped in front of me and smiled, it set my teeth on edge.
https://northseawriter.wordpress.com/2021/07/23/writer-in-motion-week-2-sulphur-and-smoke/
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Week 1 posts / First Draft: Sulphur and Smoke
« on: July 16, 2021, 10:52:58 AM »
This is my first year participating, and I really enjoyed diving into this one. Would love to hear everyone's thoughts!
I backed away as smoke pooled around his face and under his hood. He reached up to catch the tendrils, to shape them, and in the process remake his features.
For that's what his kind did, and had done, for centuries...
https://northseawriter.wordpress.com/2021/07/16/writer-in-motion-2021-and-july-update/
I backed away as smoke pooled around his face and under his hood. He reached up to catch the tendrils, to shape them, and in the process remake his features.
For that's what his kind did, and had done, for centuries...
https://northseawriter.wordpress.com/2021/07/16/writer-in-motion-2021-and-july-update/
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Week 1 posts / Re: My First draft
« on: July 15, 2021, 03:38:45 PM »
Oooh loved the Witcher vibes of this, and the twist at the end! 
Looking forward to seeing more over the next few weeks.
Looking forward to seeing more over the next few weeks.
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Week 1 posts / Re: 2021 First Draft: Fire Season
« on: July 15, 2021, 03:35:52 PM »
I really loved this! Such powerful imagery.... Can't wait to see what happens with it over the next few weeks!
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