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ARobertsWrites

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Unedited, Untitled Draft
« on: August 04, 2020, 12:25:47 PM »
Here's my unedited draft: https://writing.fanfarevt.com/writer-in-motion-unedited-first-draft/

This is totally out of the norm for genre. Curse my pantser writing style. :D I've got some serious work to do now. Clean up, streamline, and...figure out the actual story. No biggie, right?!
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Re: Unedited, Untitled Draft
« Reply #1 on: August 04, 2020, 03:20:26 PM »
This is great, what a conundrum for them! This could easily be the start of an awesome thriller or romantic suspense. I like the imagery with the campfire too!
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Re: Unedited, Untitled Draft
« Reply #2 on: August 04, 2020, 06:52:12 PM »
Loved the dynamic between the two characters. Also, this line: "The silence curled through the camp" really struck me. Well done. I look forward to seeing where you take it!
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Re: Unedited, Untitled Draft
« Reply #3 on: August 05, 2020, 12:05:55 AM »
Thanks :-D
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Re: Unedited, Untitled Draft
« Reply #4 on: August 06, 2020, 03:20:20 PM »
Oh very interesting direction! I love the relationship between the two, and the pros and cons back and forth! This is going to be great to see your process as you polish this!
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