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Headhunters - Third Draft (CP Edits)
« on: August 17, 2020, 07:55:22 PM »
Not much has changed between this draft and the last; just a couple lines and word choice edits that have been cleaned for clarity or cut for the word count. I changed Rose?s font to a slightly nicer color. My CPs didn?t have a seizure while reading so that?s a good sign - in fact one suggested I make all the names colored, too, haha (I considered, but did not.)
Hi, Jeni! Hope you have fun, hahaha



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