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abailton

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Self-edited Draft, Week 2: In the Country of Shadows
« on: July 24, 2021, 02:48:38 AM »
It took me several tries to edit this to something I'm comfortable with. It is only 540 words.

https://www.adriabailton.com/musings/writer-in-motion-week-2-self-edited-story
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songmaiden

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Re: Self-edited Draft, Week 2: In the Country of Shadows
« Reply #1 on: July 24, 2021, 08:04:34 PM »
You?re so hard on yourself! I think this is unique piece, and I don?t think it?s too short at all.
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