So Far Untitled Draft One (Fantasy)

[Clari]

I thought, why not try a dual timeline of sorts in under a thousand words. And why not make it cold. And vignett-y.

In short: a giant journeys up a mountain to a tower between the realms, to bring home the dying cloud spirit who once fell from the skies to make her wish come true.

I blogged my reaction, my mind?s idea to take the once-looked-at prompt to a freezing mountain that has nothing to do with the pic and all to do with me typing while walking out in the cold, the story itself, and some preliminary notes-to-self, all in my first post here.

I have lots of self-critical thoughts about whether things worked or not, but I?m keeping those for next week?s post.

[Grim Dreamer]

Nice! Lots of ways to go with this one to bring the focus in on a specific moment in the story!

[Jeni Chappelle]

I really like how you broke down your thought process and left yourself notes about what you want to revise. What a great start! Can't wait to see where this goes.

[SKaeth]

I really like the dual-timelines here, and I don't normally say that, but I got a poetic, folktale feel from it that I think really works!