Author Topic: The First Draft (Read 2619 times)

Steph Whitaker · « **on:** November 05, 2019, 09:14:19 PM »

Here it is! The first draft of my short story.

Grim Dreamer · « **Reply #1 on:** November 06, 2019, 03:01:38 AM »

Interesting idea! Should be fun to see it evolve.

songmaiden · « **Reply #2 on:** November 07, 2019, 01:37:19 AM »

Loved this!

rmcwilliams86 · « **Reply #3 on:** November 08, 2019, 02:29:49 AM »

Very nice. Loved it.

SKaeth · « **Reply #4 on:** November 12, 2019, 01:57:35 AM »

Great job! I love the sharp turn the story took, with a sudden uptick in danger, and the ending was beautiful!

Steph Whitaker · « **Reply #5 on:** November 14, 2019, 02:41:43 PM »

Thank you for all the encouraging comments! I can't wait for you to read the self-edited version.

Fariha Khayyam · « **Reply #6 on:** November 14, 2019, 04:02:35 PM »

oohh i want to read the final draft of this one!

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