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ARobertsWrites
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Unedited, Untitled Draft
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August 04, 2020, 12:25:47 PM »
Here's my unedited draft:
https://writing.fanfarevt.com/writer-in-motion-unedited-first-draft/
This is totally out of the norm for genre. Curse my pantser writing style.
I've got some serious work to do now. Clean up, streamline, and...figure out the actual story. No biggie, right?!
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Vickywrites
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Re: Unedited, Untitled Draft
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August 04, 2020, 03:20:26 PM »
This is great, what a conundrum for them! This could easily be the start of an awesome thriller or romantic suspense. I like the imagery with the campfire too!
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Erin Fulmer
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Re: Unedited, Untitled Draft
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August 04, 2020, 06:52:12 PM »
Loved the dynamic between the two characters. Also, this line: "The silence curled through the camp" really struck me. Well done. I look forward to seeing where you take it!
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ARobertsWrites
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Re: Unedited, Untitled Draft
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August 05, 2020, 12:05:55 AM »
Thanks :-D
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SKaeth
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Re: Unedited, Untitled Draft
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August 06, 2020, 03:20:20 PM »
Oh very interesting direction! I love the relationship between the two, and the pros and cons back and forth! This is going to be great to see your process as you polish this!
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