Ethereal Child ( First Draft )

[Antoinette_TheCreator]

Below is the google doc link to the first draft of my short story Ethereal Child for the Writer in Motion prompt. I really enjoyed writing this while also drawing inspiration from the prompt image, its a bit more than 1K words but I really got into a flow while writing. ( Pantsed )

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T6qSzDPp0YYFhVj3KVDDQ59FNmVYTeMFhexfnsEqrPA/edit?usp=sharing

[SKaeth]

Oh excellent first draft! I love the twist at the end-- very powerful emotions there! Looking forward to seeing what this becomes!

[Erin Fulmer]

Wow! Gorgeous and lyrical use of language, powerful descriptions, and you've fleshed out what feels like a fully realized fantasy world in a small amount of words. I think the voice is very strong here. I really enjoyed this one and I can't wait to see how it develops.

[K. J. Harrowick]

Oh goodness, this is so gorgeous I want to cry. I absolutely love the voice and mood you've woven into this, and the twist at the end is just perfect.

I definitely want to read all the things in this world. 

[AnthonyEden]

Imagine me doing a silly dance in front of my computer. Yeah. This is amazing! Such a deep and richly textured world you've painted with your words.

Gimme mooooore!

[Antoinette_TheCreator]

Imagine me doing a silly dance in front of my computer. Yeah. This is amazing! Such a deep and richly textured world you've painted with your words.

Gimme mooooore!

Im thrilled that you enjoyed it so much, thank you for the kind feedback. This is a short story to my high fantasy series Kisodoh so there is definitely more to come I can tell you that much.

[Antoinette_TheCreator]

Oh goodness, this is so gorgeous I want to cry. I absolutely love the voice and mood you've woven into this, and the twist at the end is just perfect.

I definitely want to read all the things in this world. 

Its an honor to inspire such emotions into readers! Thank you, once I complete my series you will be hearing a lot more of Sinnilah.

[Antoinette_TheCreator]

Wow! Gorgeous and lyrical use of language, powerful descriptions, and you've fleshed out what feels like a fully realized fantasy world in a small amount of words. I think the voice is very strong here. I really enjoyed this one and I can't wait to see how it develops.

Yes Im curious to see how it will turn out as well, all part of the WIM journey and I love it