Ethereal Child - CP Edited

[Antoinette_TheCreator]

Big round of applause for my critique partners Erika and Yara, thank you both for the great feedback on Ethereal Child. It's difficult weaving together such an intricately designed narrative in only 1K words, especially since there is so much mystery and unknowns intentionally woven into the main characters POV. My desired response from CP round is that there wasn't too much vague exposition and info dumping at the same time that clogged the flow of the story. I'm confident now that the story has achieved a good balance in the narrative based on feedback. I wonder how far I will go with Ethereal Child, so far its been quite the enriching experience.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yZGIGwuy6cebm8YNQDkwbFoQzHjAoy5cp-hIiGue_UA/edit?usp=sharing