This week I had three amazing critique partners--2 new ones, and my forever CP. As you'll see in my post, I'm pretty intense about my CPs. They're amazing. Thanks to Megan Van Dyke and Steph Whitaker for their questions and comments, which helped me dive deeper into the MC's POV. I even switched to 1st person for a bit to see what that would look like, but after I got comments back from KJ Harrowick I realized I had added a deeper POV but taken away clarity, so it's back to 3rd! Hopefully I've lived up to those incredible CPs and added both depth and clarity.
https://smroffey.com/writer-in-motion-week-3-cp-feedback/
Topic: Week 3 CP Edited Draft - Poisonous Thoughts (Read 1497 times)