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Headhunters - Final Draft (Editor edit)
« on: August 29, 2020, 02:01:24 PM »
Well there's not much for me to say this round. The feedback I got was a handful of line edits, mostly comma suggestions. Jeni seemed pretty thoroughly flummoxed by the premise so perhaps she didn't understand enough to give any other kind of critique XD

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gMZz0AkDhd69Y-SC_Z7z-lqnpn3aRXaNMjLc6mBiFZk/edit?usp=sharing
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