I've posted the draft of my story, along with the process of writing it and already the things I know I need to do for self-editing week.
First lines: "I am made of smoke and dreams and things you don?t want to see in the mirror. I am feared, but I am not the one to be scared of. I live in the country of shadow."
https://www.adriabailton.com/musings/writer-in-motion-week-1-initial-draft