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KathrynH

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Fire-Power
« on: November 08, 2019, 04:32:13 PM »
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Grim Dreamer

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Re: Fire-Power
« Reply #1 on: November 08, 2019, 09:14:27 PM »
This one I really like! I wouldn't have thought of the flare as a baton being passed, but that's a good take on it.
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Re: Fire-Power
« Reply #2 on: November 09, 2019, 09:42:08 PM »
I do like the superhero theme for Kerry in this prompt and how she had fire power.  Very strong and gripping.
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Re: Fire-Power
« Reply #3 on: November 12, 2019, 01:54:34 AM »
Really well done! The ending took my breath away, the suspense, the longing, the worries for the future and what she would become. I love the superhero theme!
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Re: Fire-Power
« Reply #4 on: November 16, 2019, 09:06:24 PM »
Thanks everyone! I totally forgot to check the forum after I posted this  ::)
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