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Kristin Record

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The Drowning Game - Third draft (CP round)
« on: November 19, 2019, 08:51:19 PM »
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Re: The Drowning Game - Third draft (CP round)
« Reply #1 on: November 19, 2019, 10:02:39 PM »
Very nice! Like many of the changes!
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Re: The Drowning Game - Third draft (CP round)
« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2019, 11:00:15 PM »
This was such a good update to the story. I feel like I understand the characters so much more now. Very good job.
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