First Draft: Exile

[Jeffrey Ricker]

Whew! I signed up late and didn't get started writing until Thursday, so this is a) very rough and b) very much over length and c) very late. But, it's done.

https://jeffrey-ricker.com/writer-in-motion-week-1-exile/

Now I can't wait to check out other folks' work.

[SKaeth]

This was great! I love how you wove in their past into the events, and I'm interested to see what you choose to cut!

[Jeffrey Ricker]

This was great! I love how you wove in their past into the events, and I'm interested to see what you choose to cut!

Thanks! That's the tricky part.  However, it helps that I almost always over-write and can tighten things up a lot. So glad you enjoyed it!

[K. J. Harrowick]

Love this! B definitely makes me think of Johnny 5. 

[Erin Fulmer]

I enjoyed this so much. Great characters and conflict with a really interesting backstory. Love the caretaking bot. Glad you're joining us!