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Kimberly B.

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Exiled--Self-edit
« on: August 14, 2020, 02:35:40 AM »
Hey everyone!

You can read my week 2 self-edited version of my story "Exiled" here.

https://kimberlybea.com/2020/08/14/writer-in-motion-week-2/
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« Reply #1 on: August 14, 2020, 04:56:18 AM »
Wow, what an entertaining story! It was effortlessly written, too. Bravo on writing an older woman MC in a fantasy story. The most surprising part is that it ended with a knock at the door (which is how my story starts).

Well done.
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Dan Koboldt
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Creator of THE TRIANGLE, a sci-fi adventure series (Serial Box, April 2019)
Editor of Putting the Science in Fiction (Writer's Digest, October 2018)
Author of Gateways to Alissia (Harper Voyager 2016-2018)
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