https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ko98pEv-X2hPsMcoBvFytiz4NlyOZbiG8U4czUvAAlM/editI'm very grateful to Justine Manzano for catching my commas! I struggle with placement sometimes (I've recently wondered if it's because of a habit from another language, but I guess I'll never know for sure), and having an experienced eye look over it makes a huge difference in knowing that even the small details are reviewed.
There wasn't much else to change between Draft 3 and 4 though so that's all I've got for this week!