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Putting the Tertiaries to Rest [FOURTH DRAFT]
« on: August 25, 2020, 08:55:33 PM »
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ko98pEv-X2hPsMcoBvFytiz4NlyOZbiG8U4czUvAAlM/edit

I'm very grateful to Justine Manzano for catching my commas! I struggle with placement sometimes (I've recently wondered if it's because of a habit from another language, but I guess I'll never know for sure), and having an experienced eye look over it makes a huge difference in knowing that even the small details are reviewed.

There wasn't much else to change between Draft 3 and 4 though so that's all I've got for this week!
« Last Edit: August 25, 2020, 08:57:42 PM by Cobalt »
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Re: Putting the Tertiaries to Rest [FOURTH DRAFT]
« Reply #1 on: September 01, 2020, 07:38:52 PM »
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