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Erin Fulmer
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2021 First Draft: Fire Season
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July 14, 2021, 05:58:55 PM »
All right, here's a link to my first draft! I don't know what it's doing but it sure is doing SOMETHING.
He comes at dusk, the shadow man.
He hovers in the corner of my vision, dissolving when I look straight at him, looming when I look away. Sometimes he is indistinct, smudged at his edges like smoke, only the suggestion of a man?s shape and a man?s height. Other times, he seems almost solid. At those moments, I believe that if I turn just enough, if I squint just right, he might even have a face I could know.
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https://erinfulmerwrites.wordpress.com/2021/07/14/wim-2021-first-draft/
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Meredith Crosbie
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Re: 2021 First Draft: Fire Season
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July 15, 2021, 03:35:52 PM »
I really loved this! Such powerful imagery.... Can't wait to see what happens with it over the next few weeks!
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