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songmaiden

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Evayolin's Ghosts (First Draft)
« on: November 07, 2019, 01:52:22 AM »
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Grim Dreamer

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Re: Evayolin's Ghosts (First Draft)
« Reply #1 on: November 07, 2019, 10:18:28 PM »
Lots of nice description and characterization! Nice job!
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Re: Evayolin's Ghosts (First Draft)
« Reply #2 on: November 09, 2019, 04:08:35 PM »
Love love love this visit to Pelori Nepal. So excited to see this one flesh out. :dragon: :taco:
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Re: Evayolin's Ghosts (First Draft)
« Reply #3 on: November 09, 2019, 11:48:45 PM »
I love this ghost story theme and how it took them on a mystical journey. Great characterization and nice storytelling.
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Re: Evayolin's Ghosts (First Draft)
« Reply #4 on: November 10, 2019, 03:35:18 AM »
So cool that this is where this photo took you. I can totally see it too! The artwork is a nice touch. This definitely made me want to read more too--that twist!!
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Re: Evayolin's Ghosts (First Draft)
« Reply #5 on: November 12, 2019, 02:00:43 AM »
I love your vivid description and the direction you took with this! Really nice job!
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