Draft 1 - A Day on the Water

[KristenH]

I loved the sailing theme set in Sydney. Great sense of adventure to take me on a journey.

[NLS80K]

Thanks, Kristen, I'm glad you liked it. 

[arianascribbles]

Excellent use of the prompt! You incorporated all of the visual elements of the photo into your story in such a perfectly believable way

[Thuy]

Your words paint such a vivid picture! I can see the yacht tossing in the storm and feel the anxiety of the people on board. All the signs of a great tale!

[NLS80K]

Excellent use of the prompt! You incorporated all of the visual elements of the photo into your story in such a perfectly believable way

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. 

[NLS80K]

Your words paint such a vivid picture! I can see the yacht tossing in the storm and feel the anxiety of the people on board. All the signs of a great tale!

Thank you, I'm glad you like my story.